Our METICULOUS SUBSTANTIVE EDIT covers the following aspects of storytelling:

• The Role of the Protagonist as a driving force in the narrative
• The Heftiness of the forces of antagonism.
• Are the stakes high enough to initiate characters’ actions?
• Is the Inciting Incident strong enough?
• How effective is the Point of View voice?
• What role do setting and atmosphere play in the narrative?
• What are the Overarching Dramatic Questions your manuscript asks and are they answered?
• How well does the mix of round and flat characters support the story?
• What plot structure is used and is it effective for the genre?
• Do the subplots support the themes?
• Does the story start in media res?
• Does the story start in the right place?
• Is the dialogue realistic while also offering opportunities for subtext?
• Is the voice and dialogue consistent in each character?
• How well does the overall structure and scene structure move the story forward?
• Are there aspects of creative writing that should be addressed?
• Are there any questions that have arisen specific to this manuscript?

This detailed report covers the critically important aspects of successful story-telling as outlined above. This comprehensive approach is designed to educate new and emerging writers in the essential building blocks of novels or memoirs. We are available to meet in person if you live within a reasonable driving distance. Otherwise, our findings, including rewrite recommendations, are emailed in advance, and discussed with you in detail in a supportive, informative 90 minute online zoom or telephone chat format. (your choice)

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